There are seven days in a week. Which day is my favourite day? It’s Friday.
On Friday, I have P.E. class and art class. I like doing sports and drawing pictures. I have fish, beef, egg and green beans for lunch. They are my favourite food. And on Friday evening, I can watch TV for a long time, and I can play computer games, too. But if it was really Friday everyday, that would be not good, either. Because I will not have weekends. Oh, no! I don’t want it to be Friday everyday now.
Can you tell me about your favourite day?
点评:本文小作者写出最喜欢的一天,与其他作文平淡无奇相比,这篇作文没有仅仅写出这一天有什么课,做了什么事情,而是笔锋一转,写出如果每天都是星期五,那么就失去快乐的周末,可见学生的想法是多么可爱。